What is one idea, suggestion, or approach from a group member that improved your paragraph or changed the way you thought about the argument?

 Prompt Response: One suggestion that my group member made was how I was writing, they told me they found it confusing to understand my writing based on my choice of words, I think this taught me that I should find better ways to convey my thoughts or expand my vocabulary.

Summary: In class we worked together as a group to write an argumentative paragraph on "The average person does not care about your sexuality."

Reflection: Working with others in groups has really helped be with how I can improve my writing to whoever is reading my evidence.